Monday, March 03, 2008

Bin Tum

I dont know how well i can do this.. but i really want to pen down this anxiety..

i look for those eyes that i know are looking at me from somewhere, i dont know why, i dont how, i'm just waiting for this wait to end.. its like i see him now and i dont the next moment.. i want to, just want to be with him, hear him talk to him laugh with him cry with him...... my heartz pounding waiting to b touched, to b held to feel that warmth to experiance that peace to reach the end of this endless void, how;d you leave me alone in this whole wide world.. :( .. my days and nights are so lonely without you, how is it that your so close to my heart and not near me now.. you are hidden in every prayer of mine.. i think of you beg for you.. i dint realise when i surrendered to you.... without you i'm alone, i dont know where i;m lost..

Gosh.. i know i screwed it up :D:D:D

this was an attempt to summarize the feel of a song i'm goin gaga over since some days now.. but i actually realised.. :D i really really messed it up.. :D..

will put down the lyrics sometimes soon.. untill then.. umm.. Alvidaa! ( this song is on, so i thought it fits in! although i know its a lil bhaari cz i know m gona cm back very soon :D)

n oh ya! i'd like to know ap sab ke very first reactions after the first few lines of this post.. :D

10 comments:

musafir said...

i prepared myself to read some big news ahead after the first lines :)) .. shaayad mausam ka asar ho .. par sab logon ko kuch ho raha hai.

TaSnEeM said...

loll

Anonymous said...

well, the first few lines are ur TRUE FEELINGS,which just flowed. and the minute u realised what u were writing u wanted to cover it all up. smart girl. .... after all true feelings r weighty and one cannot get rid of em soo easily and neither can u hide em.
but everybody wants to conceal them from the world ........ i wonder y????? i say when u feel it express it ....... and do it khul ke happily..
to end it ISQH AUR MUSKH chupaye nahi chuptey. bad try.......

Anilz said...

For the first 2 lines i thot it was actually ur feeling. Frm then onwards i thot this cant be our dumbo :P. Actually i thot u were trying ur hand at poetry. Neways, why dont u give a try on the same lines ;-). I knw ur gud at dat.

Anilz said...

P.S : Iam i missing on smething. Well Mr. Anonymous (iam sure its mister) seems to knw u betr n has a point :D.

TaSnEeM said...

lollll, i guess i must try such things here more often.. its actually getting me comments huh! now i undstand that filmi funda of actors getting into nonsense only to hog limelight.. it actually happensss?? hahaha..
aneways.. Mister Anonymous ( well ur mister coz my frnd Anil says so, else i'm more than willing to call u miss:D and i know Anil wud be more than happy to know u r miss :D:D)will be courteous as usualy, thank you for dropping by, and c'mon i aint sayin anything more dan dat :D

@ Anil
Paaaji, i thot u got me right yaa.. fir secnd wala.. mmm let me down :(
but chalegaa.. heheh m luvin this!

To All:
keep coming to read the lyrics f the song m refereing to.. i know all of u are more than curious now.. hahaha

Unknown said...

LOLLLLL....
i jus cudn't stop laughing readin t comments.. :P
n my reaction when i read t 1st few lines.. i was sure u wud end it up wit something like this..
aisa hosaktha hai ke our sweeeet lil tas is feelin all this for real aur humko (anilzz n me) ab pata chale...
v'll b t 1st to know if anything like tat happens.. haina tas.. hehe ..
wat say anillzz?

TaSnEeM said...

hihahahaha( ye wicked waali hasi hai haan)

loll .. gud goinnn!!!

Anilz said...

Manso dnt be in an illusion. Mayb she wants it be knwn only to a closeeee few :P. Mayb we aren't lucky enuf to be in dat list :(. Hmm chalega. Tas, tumhari khushi mein hi hamari khushi hai :). Dost dost na raha ........

TaSnEeM said...

Ye hui na Anil waaali baat!! ek anonymous hi kaafi thaa.. n luk who says dost dost naa raha :P:P neways.. mansoo.. u live in ur illusion wali world ( i mean like how anil says) n i'll be in mine ( like how anony says) n waise Anil too.. hameshaa se hii..?
heheh... ok dats bout it fr now!
Adioss
now i know how to get u guyz commenting fr me :P:P:P:P